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Warhammer 40,000 / Fan Fiction / Yes, another story >:D
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on: February 28, 2007, 08:16:48 PM
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Arko was snapped out of his reverie by the return of the Apothecary, who had an entourage of 3 tech priests. "We will graft this," Said one of the priests in a grating, metallic tone, indication a metal apedature on a scented cloth,"To your elbow..." Arko nodded, preparing himself for the rituals that he would have to go through to persuade the machine spirit inside the bionic replacement to graft to his flesh. As the priests started singing a praise to the omnissah, Arko slipped into half-sleep, when he shuts down half of his brain while the other half remained aware of his surroundings.
"Die, alien scum!" Roared Zane, hacking through the limbs of several Tyranids. He and his squad had just penetrated the structure, and were now fighting deeper into it. For all they knew, they were the deepest White Scars squad in the facility. Fresh bodies joined the piles already littering the corridors and halls, the evidence of a fighting retreat by the Revilers. As they fought their way through a massive underground church, something massive dragged its way through a great archway towards them. "By the throne..." Swore Zane, as he looked apon a trygon.
:p Short and sweet, bit short on time, sorry.
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Warhammer 40,000 / Discussion / Dark Angels
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on: February 28, 2007, 08:02:56 PM
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Pretty stoke about all the new stuff coming out? I sure am!  Getting the £50 set (With the Rhino),looks really cool. Also, the codex looks awesome, with all the detail. /discuss 
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Warhammer 40,000 / Discussion / Carnifex look like Zerg Zergling
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on: February 21, 2007, 07:13:34 PM
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Just human nature, I guess. "Wow, look at that" "Yeah, thats pretty cool" "Ima try and do it too!" "And me!" "Wow, that was cool." "Yeah!" "Look, that guys doing it too!" Etc, etc. If you see someone doing somethings that looks good, you wanna do it too right? Same with corporate companies...
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Warhammer 40,000 / Discussion / Carnifex look like Zerg Zergling
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on: February 21, 2007, 09:38:43 AM
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Wtf wolf? Elldan? thats Ell-dan pronounced, right? Illidan is Ill-i-dan. Different  And half the people that play blizzard games dont even care, until someone repetedly shouts in their face "BLIZZARD COPIES EVERY SINGLE OTHER GAME/FRANCHISE EVAR!!11!!!" Then they go and look it up and see that people have drawn lines from blizzard to almost everything you could imagine, which is Bullshit. Seriously, what is with all the warcraft hate from warhammer fans?
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Warhammer 40,000 / Discussion / Carnifex look like Zerg Zergling
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on: February 19, 2007, 07:13:47 PM
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....Im sorry, but...I PLAY WoW! :oops: Yeah...Although I don't see where you getting all this "Blizz copying GW" stuff. And WoW doesn't even have a story-line, its a fragging MMORPG! There is no "End" of the game. Im sorry, I just don't like it when people take the piss out of a game and its makers when they probably have never played it. And I sense a big argument being spawned out of this...
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Warhammer 40,000 / Discussion / Confused...
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on: February 19, 2007, 07:08:27 PM
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Or clip it off, and take one of the bolters meant for the front of the IG tanks (Chimaera's anyway) and stick that on.
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Warhammer 40,000 / Fan Fiction / Yes, another story >:D
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on: February 19, 2007, 07:05:31 PM
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Yeah. I did it again >.< Disappeared....eh...lets just get onto the story.
Arko delved even deeper into his memories... Arko awoke,every muscle in his body stiff and aching. He got up from his bed of leaves and looked around. He'd run into the forest the day before, and stumbled upon a giant tree with the roots forming a sort of hollow near the ground, making it a great shelter from the rain. He'd woken many times in the night, hearing bug-like sounds in the forest all around him. Now, however, there was no sound. Not even the birds singing. Then he heard a crack, like a twig braking and whirled around to see two yellow eyes staring right back at him. He yelped and tried to run, but his legs were frozen. The thing in front of him opened its mouth to reveal a gaping maw of sharp, curved teeth. It screamed as it leapt towards him, but in mid-leap there was a booming roar and the thing was blown into bits. Arko collapsed, gore and bits of flesh covering him. He could hear footsteps coming towards him, and he turned his head and saw shining white greaves of a material he didn't recognize. Veteran Sargent Zane looked down on a young boy, wearing nothing but rags and covered in tryranid ichor. "Brother-captain,"he said into his helmet's vox, "I've found a survivor."
Bolter blasting, Brother-Apothecary Poll of the Revilers chapter was forced to pull back even further into the compound. He punched his reductor through the head of a chittering alien, as his squad fired volley after volley of bolts at the horde storming the hallway. Bodies lined the walls, piled to the ceiling in some places. Ichor covered the floor, making the polished steel slippy. A krak grenade exploded nearby, shrapnel bouncing off the walls and creating a metallic storm, shreding flesh to a mist. Aliens screamed, Space Marines yelled, and bolters fired. The revilers were being pushed back, but the tyranids were paying the price.
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Warhammer 40,000 / Fan Fiction / The Story of a Hero - Chapter 10, Part I
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on: December 31, 2006, 08:54:06 PM
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Nice. Eh...something about the way you write. Strange, it is. Its like A game. "He saw the carnifex" *YOUR TURN* "He threw the hammer"...Its a bit... I cant really explain it, but it makes me cringe  Anyways, its your way of putting detail in battle, and i can see that it works quite well, but as i said, makes me cringe. Great work overall 
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Warhammer 40,000 / Fan Fiction / Yes, another story >:D
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on: December 10, 2006, 08:00:23 PM
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Eh, the forums buggered up for me. Every post, says ERROR when i say submit. Lost about 6 paragraphs just now... :evil: Too pissed off to re-write at the moment, will try and write tomorrow. Sorry...
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