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Author Topic: Exterminatus - Part I  (Read 35779 times)
Battle Brother Arius
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« Reply #15 on: February 15, 2010, 06:05:18 PM »
Ah well then, when I have time I shall.

One request is all I need!  Cheesy
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« Reply #16 on: May 20, 2010, 09:12:07 PM »
Very good! I feel that you caught the feeling of the space marines quite well. You didn't use modern lingo (like some other stories on this forum). You also kept the marines having that epic yet human feel to them.
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