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« on: January 11, 2006, 12:31:50 AM » |
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Inteded to be some sort of conseptual art for rs2. Starting with this:  Have in mind that this isnt the finnished product, but comments is why I made the thread so plz :) make some... |
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« Reply #1 on: January 11, 2006, 12:42:55 AM » |
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The pose is not very dramatic, I think it should be.
Make us view him from below or above, and give him a more concentrated look, he actually seems quite relaxed atm.
You can't see the face of the hormagaunt - a pity.
The greatest problem with the SM pose is that he don't really looks at anything. He should look at the head, the body or into the sky (in triumph), at his sword or directly into the eyes of the viewer.
If it's hard to change this at the drawing, don't bother - but think of it when you draw the rest.
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« Reply #2 on: January 11, 2006, 01:02:49 AM » |
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im admiring his skills mostly ^^
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« Reply #3 on: January 11, 2006, 03:15:25 AM » |
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Wow, very nice work Cyberman. Very nice indeed.
I do have a bit of constructive criticism though:
As migb said, the pose isn't very dynamic, he doesn't seem to be doing anything much other than, well, posing.
The head could use some work, it looks a bit out of proportion to me.
The eagle on the chest plate doesn't look much like the ones on the models, and it looks like it's painted on to a flat surface rather than having any depth or shape of its own.
That's all I've got. Once again, excellent work.
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« Reply #4 on: January 11, 2006, 09:05:43 AM » |
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I love the shading on the gaunt, just the right kind of shinyness  Immeditely the marine's chest strikes me as being too wide and too deep. Are those tallon marks on his leg? |
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« Reply #5 on: January 11, 2006, 11:11:54 AM » |
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hey, great work! I agree with the previous posters |
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« Reply #6 on: January 11, 2006, 12:05:40 PM » |
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I think the pose is great.. He just slaughtered a nid and is just looking for more  |
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« Reply #7 on: January 11, 2006, 12:10:39 PM » |
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Oh, I forgot to praise your work. Better than I could do it, and I draw It's just that I've been a lot at a drawing-webpage ( http://www.tegnebordet.dk) with several proffetional artists that draws close to photo-realistic. |
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« Reply #8 on: January 11, 2006, 01:36:18 PM » |
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Um thx for comments , what he would be thinking is: "wheres next?" And i dont think he should be looking at the head of the nid, it gets so poetic, and I dont want that. Not supposed to be talon marks but until colouring they stay this way. And dont expect him to look like a model/figure minature because I have no one to go after. (and I dont want any) Though the eagle is going to get changed. And i agree it is undramatic, but in this pic it will stay that way, I started making the head and just continued (had another head form the beginning  )... |
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« Reply #9 on: January 11, 2006, 04:08:50 PM » |
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ur skilled :-D how long do u need to paint this and do u do it out of ur mind or whit a model in front of u? what kind of pencil do u use?
i was starting (or trying) to do such concept work too.
i mainly drawed anime "people" until now and i guess its much different :wink:
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« Reply #10 on: January 11, 2006, 05:03:30 PM » |
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an update, not just slightly better if you ask me  I use adobe photoshop cs2 and Trust 1200 Wireless tablet. This is from my mind, checking sometimes how a spacemarine acually looks on pics but nothing else. And I do not fancy anime ppl or anime in any way, im glad your trying to do some real artwork |
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« Reply #11 on: January 12, 2006, 01:33:10 AM » |
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Woo, muchly improved, especially the head!
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« Reply #12 on: January 13, 2006, 06:49:29 PM » |
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nice :wink:
would love to see more from you :-D
how long does it take you to do such pics?
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« Reply #13 on: January 16, 2006, 06:22:05 PM » |
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hmm i would like to see a colour version of this. well very dark colours.
could use something liek this for the back imige when you click on the RS2:E button to activate RS2:E2
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« Reply #14 on: January 16, 2006, 07:02:31 PM » |
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could use something liek this for the back imige when you click on the RS2:E button to activate RS2:E2 or for the menu screen. In RS we had the World Eater marine.. |
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