Xanphia

[Rebellion]

( Story about warhammer, saw wolfs so i thaught id have a go )

Colonel Stratas of the Delphius 3rd company of the Imperial guard was scared. He'd admit it, if he wasn't stuck in a mud filled trench with men too afraid to speak. They had been stuck on Xanphia for almost 3 months now, Continually being bombarded by the enemy. The damn chaos tainted people of this hive world had slaughtered Xanphia's small regiment of Imperials, and was now using the weapons they'd stolen to slaughter even more Imperial guards. They were being marshalled by the
World eaters. Still, Stratas thought, it could be worse. Thats when the order came.

Vox-oficer Roxu came bustling down the tight trench, his face in disdain.
"What is it, Roxu?" Sratas managed to shout above the din of the bombardment.
"We just got our orders, sir. The warmaster says we are to charge to the enemy Trenches with the help of the Ganith 23rd!" Roxu shouted back.
Stratas Felt empty. So this is what it came to. Charging to the enemy trench line, with only 1000 men up against over 10'000 chaos tainted hive dwellers. He clutched his lasgun to his chest.
"Warmaster Aleth sent the orders directly?!"Shouted Stratas in dis-belief.
"Yes,sir." Came Roxu's Reply. Oh god, he didn't want to die. Not like this.
He Tapped his vox bead to his sargents Channel.
"Everyone, this is it. We are to charge the enemy, and by the emporers will we shall!" Voxed Stratas.
There was a lot of garbled oaths, and then his top Sargent, Clausis, Voxed back confirming his men were ready.
And so it begins, thought stratas as his prepared to clamber over the trench wall.....

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( Chapter will be added everyday, so keep waiting )

On the other side of the battlefeild, a World Eater was mobilizing the Chaos tainted hive dwellers.
"Disciples of Khorn!" Its rasped through a corrupted vox link in its helmet.
" Are you ready to prove your worth in the Delight of bloody battle?"
There was a gurgled roar as thousands of rotted throats shouted in unision.
"Then let this be the day!" The World eater shouted. Then ,as it jumped up the trench, its helmet was vaporised By serveral Las shots.

"CHARGE!" Roared Stratas as he, and the Whole regiment of troops, clambered over the trench and ran towards whatever was waiting for them in the blackish dust. Firing blindely into the mist, stratas knew that he was going to die. Sure enough, around him his men were dying. Gluckus, one of his officers, was killed by a bolter round to the torso that evaporated his upper half into a red mist. Still, they charged on. And then, in the distance, he saw charging figures. The enemy was rushing to meet them in Hand to hand Melee. He Slung his chainsword from its holster and thumbed the activation rune. With a whine, it barked into life.
The enemy were coming closer. He fired some las shots into the mass of soldiers ahead. His aim was crap from the one handed grip he was using, but you couldnt miss when the enemy were packed tight. Then, they met in a bloody mass tangle.

Khurkan, an officer of the Ganith 23rd regiment the other side of Stratas's regiment, was killing with desperation. He was spreading the bolts from his bolt pistol all around him, and cutting everything else with his Chainsword. All of his troops were being cut down around him, but the ranks of Imperials was moving forward inch by inch, pushing the enemy back. He swung his chainsword in an arc, decapitating masses of deformed, chaos tainted hive dwellers and blasting even more with the last of his rounds in his bolt pistol. Ditching the now empty pistol, he kept swinging his chainsword around until it hit something that wasnt flesh. Turning round, he saw a huge Chaos marine turn to face the whirring blade chipping away at its armour. It raised its giant Bolt gun to face Khurkan, and was just about to fire when its Hips were sliced in two.
He looked up and saw a Huge yellow figure holding a power sword. An Imperial fist!

[Rebellion]

Look, guys, If no-ones going to bother reading this i wont continue it.

[Tortured_Soul]

MORE MORE I SAY, i want more, and i shall read until the end

[Wolf]

i have bin reading it, but its best not to psot comments until end so it doesnt interupt the story  

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Stratas was covered in blood. But, it wasnt his own. Incredibley, hed survived the first encounter and now the enemy was retreating back to their trenches. Still, stratas pushed his men on.
"We have them on the run, boys! Lets finish this, For the emperor!"
There was a roar of approval. Stratas smiled to himself, grimly. He knew that this was just the start of it. They hadn't even reached the Hive yet.

The Imperial fist turned to look at Khurkan.
"Wh-who are you??" Is all he could manage.
"I am Brother Captain Gelphius of the Imperial fists. We came when our Astropaths heard a distress call from this world. The adeptus Astartes will never leave our brothers in arms to die." The space marine, Or gelphius now, replied. Then something hit Kharkan in the back that sent him toppling.

Stratas was in their trenches now, fighting for his life. Around was hand-to-hand or bayonet fighting, and by the emperor it was bloody. Hed scavenged a las-pistol off of a body somewhere. he still didnt know if it was one of his. His chainsword was almost broke because it was clogged up with bloody matter. A stray las-round hit him in the shoulder and floored him, but he got back up straight away. Trooper kragen, one of his squad members, was stabbign with his bayont and blasting with his lasrifle nearby, as was roxu, although he was weighed down slightly by the vox pack on his back. He swung his chainsowrd in an arch, severing the head off of one chaos tainted person and then cut and arm off of another with the back-swing. He and his soldiers couldnt go on forever like this. Then he heard, and smelt, a flamer nearby.
"Cleopas, is that you?" He shouted. Cleopas was his squads flamer. But the bulk that came out of the gloom carrying a flamer definately wasn't cleopas.So he clambered out the trench and ran. the huge figure followed him.

(Hope you like it, Wont exactly be dayly anymore ^^. But ill add when i can)

[Rebellion]

All Khukan could feel was pain. He tried to move, but it hurt to much. His eyes were firmly shut, but it felt like he was moving somehow.
"Hold on, brother" Said a strange, distorted voice.
'Must be the angles' Thought Khukan. Then his eyes snatched open.
The Battlefeild was all around him, but he was flying through it.
He was on Gelpgius's Huge shoulderplate. Gelphius was blasting with his bolter, his Powersword now on his back because he was carrying Khukan with his other hand. With a tremendous effort, because it felt like his back was on fire, he moved his arm down to the holster at his hip, and took out the laspitol there. He fired some shots off into the throng of the fight.
"So, your awake." Shouted Gelphius.

'Holy Emperor' thought stratas, as the huge chaos space marine stomed towards him, his flamer belching out puffs of liquid fire. He fired some las rounds at it, but they just pinged off its armour. Stratas started to run, but he felt a searing pain across his back and immediatly went to ground, writhing around, trying to put out the fire consuming him. Luckly, he rolled into a shellhole full of water.But it was dark water....
Blood.
Stratas Jumped out straight away, but then fell again as a lasround clipped his shoulder and the pain on his back brought him down.
Then he heard bolter fire and, with a splash, the chaos marine that had so nearly killed him fell into the same shell-hole he had rolled into. it didnt have a head anymore. Out of the fog came Gol, one of the sargents in their regiment.
"Gol, thank god!" Shouted Stratas. Gol Smiled grimly, and was about to turn round when a las round punched through his thigh. Screaming, he fell.

()

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Khurkan was in agony. The jolting of gelphius's run and the recoil from his pistol was making it worse.
"Nearly there now!" Shouted Gelphius. Khukan fired 3 more shots before he dropped his pistol. Then he passed out.

"Shit!" Screamed Stratas, crawling over to Gol. There was a clear hole through his thigh.
"Go on without me,sir! Im just deadweight!" Cried Gol.
"No, we need to-" Stratas abruptley stopped when another huge figure came out of the gloom.
"Oh crap..." he grabbed gol's pistol and Tried to prop himself up, but the pain was to much. He looked up to see........
A Space marine. it (or he) Ran over to them.
"Hail, brothers. i am Darnas. Help is on the way." he said. Then a Chimaera came into view. Stratas almost cried in relief theyn were gonna be okay....
thats when Darnas's head exploded.

( You gotta love doing this...)

[Wolf]

sorry to interupt the story, but this is bloody brilliant mate ^^ keep it up

[Rebellion]

( Thanks...)
next thing khurkan knew, he was lying down. but it was warm, and there was a strange smell....he knew that smell.
Blood mixed with antibiotics.
He was in a field hospital.
He tried to get up, but the searing pain almost made him pass out. then he remebered how something like a jackhammer hit his back, and how an imperial fist-gelphius-had saved him.
A doctor came over, carrying a dataslate.
"good to see your awake, captain." She said, making notes on the slate with a stylus. A female doctor, dont see them everyday, though Khurkan. He tried to talk, but all he could do is rasp.
"where is he...?" The doctor looked up from her dataslate.
"The Space Marine who took you in? All we got was his name, and he was off. he trekked over 20 miles, you know. From the trench line."
Khurkan started. 20 miles........
Well,  he was lucky, to say the least....

The body crumpled, almost crushing stratas. bolt rounds.
2 chaos terminators came out of the fog, storm-bolters roaring. Oh crap.
"Shit!" He screamed again, and rolled over. The pintle mounts on the chimaera opened up, spraying fire over the enemy. the squad of marines joined in too, with their normal bolters. the first terminator took 2, 3 shots and lost an arm, but kept firing. the second one lost one of its legs and was floored, but supported itself with one of its arms and shot from the floor. one of the marines fell, a hole in is breastplate. Another fell, the back of his head missing. The chimaera kept firing, relentlessly, heedless of the shots making dents and holes in its armour. the gunner was responsible for the missing arm of one of the terminators. then the one still standing stopped firing, and slid in 2 peices, decapitated at the hip.
Gelphius charged from behind the body, stabbing the floored terinator in the back and killing it. Stratas cheered half-hartedly, almsot going into shock from his wounds.
"You'll be alright,brother" Said a voice, and he saw gol being hefted up by a marine as if he was a toy, and felt himself being lifted. he was then plonked in the troop bay of the chimaera.
He then promptly passed out.

( I love writing violence xD)

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Khukan woke to another day in the infirmary. Lots of people had been brought in since he had been. Talk was that the archenemy had retreated to the hive, and all the regiments were being pulled back to re-arm and restock. There was a colnel opposite him, still sleeping.He could tell by the pins on his jacket, which was on a cabnet next to the bed. The marines had brought him in, along with a sargent. he was a couple of beds down from the colnel, and was awake. Apparently, hed been hit in the back by a round from an enemy autogun, though Gelphius had promptly killed the firer. The colnel stirred, and then woke.

Strats was in a world of pain. He opened his eyes and moaned in agony. he back was on fire. immediatly, a doctor came over.
"Your awake, sir. I bet your back hurts." He said.'What do you think, you idiot' Thought stratas.
"I'll get you some pain killers" The doctor said, and hurried away.
"So, howd you get here?" Said a voice. He couldnt see who it was, but he replied anyway.
" Flamer, back" Was all he could manage.
"Ouch. I got shot in the back. Lucky it went low." Chatted the voice.
Then an explosion went off somewhere.
( Sorry, quick one.)

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( Havent been on in ages....xD. Ill be away next week, though. Heres a bit to keep you reading.)
And another. And another.
Screams came from outside, and the smell of prothemium was staining the air.
"Crap!" Cried Khukan, nearly falling out of his bed."What the hells going on?!"
Then he heard the crack of las-shots.
Several doctors and nurses took side-arms, mostly auto-pistols, out of hidden holsters and slowly went to the door. Then a stray las round flew in through the tent canvas and vaporized a doctors head, making them all hit the deck.
Khukan looked around, desperate for a weapon since he lost both of his.
He got up, with terrible pain and diffulcutly, and hobbled over to the dead doctor. he picked up his gun.
"Okay people." he shouted to the medical staff."You may not be my platoon but its gonna have to do."

Stratas groaned as all the doctors rushed out with the officer guy who had rounded them up. He was barely conscious, but he knew that if he fell asleep he wouldnt be able to defend himself if ...whatever was out there got in. So he lay back in the pillow and waited it out.

Khukan looked at the scene saround him as he walked out of the Medics tent. Several tents were on fire, because of the prothemium barrels they had inside. A munitions store had been cooked off, and a crater and lots of burned bodies was all that was left of it. People ran around in panic, some on fire, with officers trying to calm them down. A vicious pint-blank struggle was going on in the barracks area, where several soldiers had caught cultists trying to set fire to the barrels round the back of the barracks. Khukan walked as fast as he could towards them.
He fired the auto-pistol, downign a cultist with a shot to the groin.
Several of the doctors started firing too, but more wildly since they werent trained soldiers like Khukan. As they fought, khukan saw more cultist emerge from the woods behind the encampment. Xanphia was more woody than it deserved to be, and the forests could hidea lot of secrets. There was an air-base in there, somewhere.....
Khukan came back to the task at hand. This was going to be hard.

( Thats all, folks! )

[evinstacey]

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[Typheron]

Typheron is sitting here looking annoyed.

You have shown up on these forum and posted twice, both of them spam.

Consider this your first Warning.

Back on topic, story is decent, keep it up, the more you write, the more time i can aste reading it and not working so i urge you to do more.

[evinstacey]

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