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Daedr0th
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« on: April 22, 2009, 11:29:01 AM »
wow i cant even believe the amount of damage inflicted upon my knee about DIS
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« Reply #1 on: April 22, 2009, 11:46:05 AM »
A similar style to this:
http://forums.sciflicks.com/showthread.php?t=15723

A resonable start, although lacking in structure and the grammer is a bit off in places.

Additionally, from a background standpoint there are a few flaws, but if your going for straight humour then thats not as important.
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God of the outer darkness. bringer of evil, storms, plague, misery, and torment. Protects fugitives, Apparently...

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